Comments for Quiet Rivers

Comment on Watershed by Jet

Jet — Wed, 10 Sep 2008 05:17:33 +0000

Are you familiar with the Jaycee’s Creed?

I just recently realized - or discovered (it’s up for grabs which… heh) - that my Dad probably lived by it. It was written, very prominently, in one of his journals. The last line goes… that service to humanity is the best work of life.

I decided that I would be carrying on in that manner. Not that I knew how to go about it.

Now I think you just showed me how.

Comment on Shadow of a Woman by summerivers

summerivers — Wed, 10 Sep 2008 01:48:06 +0000

yes, I like this poem… very much so :)

Comment on Shadow of a Woman by summerivers

summerivers — Wed, 10 Sep 2008 00:40:39 +0000

do you remember when you wrote ‘Sleepless,’ and you told me that you wrote it in a manner of ‘lending what substance i could to those
parts of me that will always be alone’?

well, you never are. be the seeker that you are for all the time that’s been lost, somehow you never are alone. or at least never will be… again.

Comment on Oasis by Aj3na

Aj3na — Tue, 09 Sep 2008 22:29:22 +0000

And you are her repose. And she’d sing her favorite song, “…que lastima me da, aun corre por mis venas, la llama de pasión que me dejaste, pero tu eres…” ajeno. Simply exquisite. Thank you for writing.

Comment on It’s All About Time in America by Jet

Jet — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 21:53:31 +0000

what can I say?
for me, this is more than beautiful.
and then beautiful because it is more than real.
and then real because none could be truer.
and then true because of how it became beautiful.